Wheel Immortal

Share your stories and poems with us here.
Post Reply
Realmwalker
Posts: 15
Joined: Tue Jun 29, 2021 11:58 am

Wheel Immortal

Post by Realmwalker »

O the Raft that shall beyond the Ocean lead
And o, the Decline long foretold
Sacred Wheel but turns by noble Deed
By thy Deed,
The Path and Vow uphold
For so our Lord hadst spoken:
One day the Wheel shall turn not more
It shall lay broken
And no Raft shall fare to Other Shore

And yet, but for thy noble Deed
Immortal thou shalt stand beyond Decline
And woven shall be Raft with sacred reed
Sacred Wheel shall turn beyond the claims of time
User avatar
Hazel
Former staff member
Posts: 2090
Joined: Mon Sep 23, 2019 11:15 pm
Location: she/her

Re: Wheel Immortal

Post by Hazel »

This is great! I really enjoyed it.

Are you partaking in Camp NanoWrimo this month? I'm about to start editing my novel's draft.
Happy Pride month to my queer dharma siblings!

What do you see when you turn out the lights?
Realmwalker
Posts: 15
Joined: Tue Jun 29, 2021 11:58 am

Re: Wheel Immortal

Post by Realmwalker »

Hello Hazel,

Thank you for your kind response.
I'm unaware of Camp NanoWrimo, would you be so kind to elaborate?

I recide in The Netherlands, in case that matters.

A wandered nameless,

Realmwalker
Last edited by Realmwalker on Thu Jul 01, 2021 8:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Post Reply

Return to “Creative Writing”