nirmal wrote:The blows and kicks of life
Relay a message
No matter where they're from
They're blessings in disguise
If we but learn a lesson
For the wise
Nothing is to be called bad
Any adversity of life
Is a step in his growth
If he knows to utilize
Made from 100% recycled karmanirmal wrote:Hi Ogyen,
What a vast difference?I'm still miles behind and its many many miles.My poem is too direct and can be comprehended with such ease.You really know how to change an amateur poem into one written by a real professional poet.Good, I am learning from the gift that you have and please keep giving that golden touch to my poems whenever you have time to spare.I really appreciate what you have done.You're good, a good Dharma sister.
nirmal
perhaps you just need a second pair of eyes to find what is in your work already.
Made from 100% recycled karmanirmal wrote:Birth Will Come
Awakening
Fully completely
Transform your personality will
Erasing your filthy past
The bad sage Saul
Birthed into St. Paul
Don't condemn yourself
How low
Small
How bad you've been
The chance to transform
Awaits any true seeker
Freedom to attain
Bondage and miseries ooze
In that precious second
You enlighten yourself
Made from 100% recycled karmaThe voice of silence is supreme
Beyond all levels of consciousness
All methods of communication
Be like a corpse without pride
A sea without tide
Made from 100% recycled karmaOgyen wrote:This last one Nirmal is interesting. especially the first three lines and the last two...The voice of silence is supreme
Beyond all levels of consciousness
All methods of communication
Be like a corpse without pride
A sea without tide
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