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PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 5:59 am 
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Zen influenced Haiku poems, Haikus are 17 syllable poems. Typically, 5 syllables for first line, 7 syllables in the second line, and 5 syllables in the 3rd line. Traditionally a haiku presents a pair of contrasting images, one suggestive of time and or a place, while the other is vivid, ephemeral observation. Help me write a haiku! Let's see who can write the best relating to Mahayana Buddhism!

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 6:18 am 
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i remember when i was young, in elementary school, and we had to write haikus

i wrote this one without knowing the buddhist significance of it:

what if life's a dream
where nothing is what it seems
i want to wake up

(something along those lines)

many years later when i got into buddhism and philosophy i made the connection and thought it was neat :smile:


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 20, 2011 10:01 am 
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this life is a dream
nothing can be grasped or seen
where do you wake up?

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"Neither cultivation nor seated meditation — this is the pure Chan of Tathagata."
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“Don’t rashly seek the true Buddha;
True Buddha can’t be found.
Does marvelous nature and spirit
Need tempering or refinement?
Mind is this mind carefree;
This face, the face at birth."

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 1:31 pm 
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clouds, trees,
all i see is empty.
right here right now typing.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 11:34 pm 
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7=5=7 is only in base 10.
If you write haiku in base 3 it's 12-21-12:

A day on Mars will stretch the five second food rule,
The blooming of a garden rose is missed by the snail who blinks at the very same time,
Haiku’s meter thus warped when composed in base three.

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The Chinese characters are Fo (buddha) and Ming (bright). The image is of a student of Buddhism, who, imagining himself to be a monk, and not understanding the true meaning of the words takes the sound of the words literally. Likewise, People on web forums sometime seem to be foaming at the mouth.
Original painting by P.Volker /used by permission.


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PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 4:53 am 
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counting syllables
trying to make a haiku
guess iv'e missed the point.

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