Bardo

Bardo

Postby Juha Sakari » Tue May 13, 2014 5:56 pm

The Bardo

no where now here
nowhere nowhere
nowhere
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Re: Bardo

Postby Juha Sakari » Tue May 13, 2014 7:46 pm

This is a poem about emptiness-appearance
and should read:

no where...............now here
nowhere................nowhere
...........nowhere.............
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Re: Bardo

Postby Juha Sakari » Tue May 13, 2014 8:23 pm

and
its about the space inbetween
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Re: Bardo Smoke and remains

Postby Juha Sakari » Wed May 14, 2014 1:20 pm

How much of what is there
can I remove
from this gullible flesh
that burns to
smoke and remains
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Re: Bardo

Postby Juha Sakari » Thu May 15, 2014 1:33 pm

I feel like a hobo heading down the railroad track.
Messages hanging from the trees leave no mark
or no doubt that this is the way

Right down the middle
can at times be real quick.
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Re: Bardo Smoke and remains

Postby arka » Fri May 23, 2014 11:48 am

Juha Sakari wrote:How much of what is there
can I remove
from this gullible flesh
that burns to
smoke and remains


Enjoyed the breaks at there and that excellent last line. Remains a verb/noun aggregation. Gullible flesh hmm. I am torn b/w lending it a mind and not minding it.
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Re: Bardo gullible flesh

Postby Juha Sakari » Fri May 23, 2014 6:02 pm

gullible flesh is my attachment to need and fear
some good some bad but all of it anyway.
So its the attachment not the flesh that I would have removed

may the appearance of emptiness unfold
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