love's in... jeopardy! | a haiku

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love's in... jeopardy! | a haiku

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a burnt out candle,
a bird plucked of its feathers.
what is loneliness?
"True seeing is called transcendence;
False seeing is worldliness:
Set aside both right and wrong,
And the nature of enlightenment is clear."
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ocean waves, quite lovely!
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greentara wrote:ocean waves, quite lovely!
Thank you greentara! I appreciate those words coming from another poet!!! :thanks:
"True seeing is called transcendence;
False seeing is worldliness:
Set aside both right and wrong,
And the nature of enlightenment is clear."
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