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blossom

Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:36 pm
by Ogyen
when you experience
a great deal of loneliness
any human contact
brings joy
what's tightly closed
blooms
when shared

Re: blossom

Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:43 pm
by Su DongPo
OgyenChodzom wrote:when you experience
a great deal of loneliness
any human contact
brings joy
what's tightly closed
blooms
when shared
loneliness
longing
solitude

of these three, I choose longing
longing need not be clinging or craving
unlike its cousins
it promises hope without pain
-- the strength of one
-- and the joy of two

Re: blossom

Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:12 pm
by fragrant herbs
nice poetry from the both of you.

Re: blossom

Posted: Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:48 pm
by Individual
OgyenChodzom wrote:when you experience
a great deal of loneliness
any human contact
brings joy
what's tightly closed
blooms
when shared
:applause:

Re: blossom

Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:46 pm
by nirmal
when you experience
a great deal of loneliness
any human contact
brings joy
what's tightly closed
blooms
when shared

Hi,
An international poet you are
gifted in so many ways
You live in us
reflect us
in but a few meaningful words
so well framed
delivering the message.

Congratulations.Keep :stirthepot: