Timeless tear drop

Timeless tear drop

Postby garudha » Sat Apr 05, 2014 10:23 am

I ask myself this question;
The Buddha, Does he cry?
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Re: Timeless tear drop

Postby arka » Fri May 23, 2014 11:39 am

Hey garudha, your title compromises your q somewhat. Takes away from the surprise/force. The reflexive pronoun you can do without probably. Just some thoughts. Thanks for posting.
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